Room 23 have talked about our year. Here are some of our favourite memories...
* Swimming in Term 1 in the school pool and at Aquagym. Some of us were surprised at our results and how much we improved. We also learnt new skills like floating on our back.
* Blue Skies at Kaiapoi. We went as a whole senior team which was really cool and we worked in teams. Some of the best activities were: the flying fox, balancing on the big wooden platform, swinging off the platform and holding onto the net, climbing over the big wall and getting over the barrel all together.
* AVAILLL: We loved this! It was our Term 2 reading programme where we read subtitles of movies and did activities to help our comprehension. The Year 5s and Year 6s did different programmes. We learnt skills like how to write short sentences down fast, to remember what we had seen on the screen; to be able to skim read more quickly; getting better at remembering things; it made us notice exactly what the characters were saying.
* Miss Barker our student teacher was in our class in Term 2. She is AWESOME at football so she taught us a bit about that. She also did some stuff with us about the land that changes like techtonic plates.
* Halswell Quarry: As part of our learning for 'The Land that Changes' we did a trip to Halswell Quarry. We saw the different layers of rocks on the hillside and all about different types of rocks; we learnt about the history of the quarry and the wetlands like how there were 12 men that lived in one cottage and they all had to share the same bath water; we saw the house of the man who first owned the quarry, he was really wealthy and had the first car in Christchurch.
* Showcase: We used our learning about the land that changes to inspire our senior dance pieces about the past, present and future of Christchurch. Our class did the future. Our favourite parts of the showcase was turning around at the end to show our message 'We are the future of CHCH'; how we could tell a story through dance; how everyone joined in; making up the different moves; watching all of the other classes.
* Speeches: we all enjoyed doing the speech competition. There were lots of cool topics.
* Food for Thought: we did an awesome learning programme about the food we eat. We learnt so much about what is in our food, how to read food labels, how much sugar is in different food and drinks, the food pyramid, we found out about the food that we do eat and whether it is healthy or not.
* Beach Ed and Sailing: Year 5 and Year 6 did these separate programmes in Term 4 as part of Education outside the classroom.
* CAMP! We've just got back from camp. We did these activities: Kayaking, coasteering, archery, colour game, low ropes, orienteering, sports games, tribal wars.
Overall, we have had a great year. The best thing about being in Room 23 has been...
* Mrs Hanson
* Having good friends in the class
* Having different cultures in our class
* Being surprised by the friends that we have made when we thought we didn't really know anyone in the class.
* A mixture of Year 5s and Year 6s
* Everyone cares about each other and gives each other second chances
Monday, 14 December 2015
Tuesday, 1 December 2015
Friday, 27 November 2015
Room 23s blog post
Hello I'm Jamie and I'm Jarelle,
This week the year 5s have been to beach education at Waimairi beach they did a relay and a game of octopus. They got to build a sandcastle with a friend and did a couple of water activities like boogie boarding and a swim, the parents made a square around the kids.
We have also had Mrs Brown take some photos for the year book such as specialised leaders,school council, house captains, road patrol, pal, heads ,and a year 6 photo.Sharon took the sport photos for Cricket A, Cricket B, Cricket C, both T ball teams, touch teams, volleyball teams, zone athletics and Canterbury athletics.
we have done Mola art it is when you draw something and putt patterns in the inside of it then draw a colourful pattern for the background. I did a turtle and Jarelle did a spider.
In the next few weeks we have some great fun activity's such as sailing for the year 6s, Canterbury athletics, end of year graduation ceremony, the VIP morning tea, camp, Canterbury cricket, leavers dinner and swim.
By Jamie and Jarelle
This week the year 5s have been to beach education at Waimairi beach they did a relay and a game of octopus. They got to build a sandcastle with a friend and did a couple of water activities like boogie boarding and a swim, the parents made a square around the kids.
We have also had Mrs Brown take some photos for the year book such as specialised leaders,school council, house captains, road patrol, pal, heads ,and a year 6 photo.Sharon took the sport photos for Cricket A, Cricket B, Cricket C, both T ball teams, touch teams, volleyball teams, zone athletics and Canterbury athletics.
we have done Mola art it is when you draw something and putt patterns in the inside of it then draw a colourful pattern for the background. I did a turtle and Jarelle did a spider.
In the next few weeks we have some great fun activity's such as sailing for the year 6s, Canterbury athletics, end of year graduation ceremony, the VIP morning tea, camp, Canterbury cricket, leavers dinner and swim.
By Jamie and Jarelle
Thursday, 26 November 2015
School swimming days
Hi everyone, please remember to bring your togs and towel on Mondays and Wednesdays, we have swim times on those days, starting on Monday 30th November.
Thursday, 19 November 2015
Sailing Date Correction
Please note that the date on the sailing notice is wrong. The date that the year 6s are going sailing is Tuesday December 1st.
Friday, 23 October 2015
TERM 4 WEEK 2
Hello I'm Jamie and I'm Kegan. Today we will be talking about what Room 23 have done this week.
This week we have been doing athletics training for next Wednesday. We have been doing shot put, long jump, high jump, discuss, sprints and class relay. Jamie's favourite athletics rotation is long jump sprints and high jump. Kegan's favourite athletics rotation is Sprints and High Jump.
We went to a Craig Smith show (Wonky Donkey author) and he read us some of his books and he sung us some songs. We had Craig Smith come to our class to do a writing session we learnt about how to not think and just write and Craig Smith took a photo of our class. He told us that we should write about stuff that you know about and get your emotions out in writing.
We also did writing called 'When I'm 40' Jamie's one was about how he might be a professional cricket player and play for the Blackcaps and play in the Indian Premier League. He also wrote about how he had a 3 storied mansion. Kegan's one was that he would be a Formula 1 car driver or play for the All Blacks, and he would have a two storied house with five bedrooms.
Jamie is looking forward to camp and athletics day and sailing. Kegan is also looking forward to camp and athletics day but he's gutted that he doesn't get to do sprints and discus because he has something else on. Jamie's favourite thing that we have done this year was Blue Skies and swimming sports at the start of the year. Kegan's favourite thing this year was Blue Skies and going swimming on really hot days.
We are looking forward to the rest of the year!
Kegan and Jamie.
We are looking forward to the rest of the year!
Kegan and Jamie.
Persuasive Writing
At the end of last term we started writing persuasive letters to people in our lives about issues we wanted to change or convince people about. Most of used Google Docs to publish our writing. Here are some of our persuasive letters. Are you convinced???
Persuasive letter
Dear Mum,
I need to talk to you about something. Why can’t I paint my room a different colour? I have talked to Dad about this many times and he has said yes but you said no. Anyway here are my reasons why I should be able to paint my room a different colour.
My first reason that I should be able to paint my room a different colour is that I don't like the colour of it now. it is a pinky colour. You know that my room is pink and I really don’t like that colour (I would change it to blue like the sky). Blue is my favourite colour and it will always be. So then I would not have to change it ever again. I will also like the new change. So that is my first reason.
My second reason that I should change my room is that I will do most of the work. Dad only has to help a little bit on the ceiling,the high bits of the walls and the edges of the door ways. I can do the rest. It won’t be a hassle. I can chose the colour of the paint myself. You won’t even have to be down in my room with me! If I haven't already convinced you enough my last reason will definitely do the trick!
My next reason is that I will do lots of jobs. I will do the dishwasher for 2 weeks by myself and any other jobs that you need done (eg. washing windows,weeding) and for free (that is a great deal) if you let me paint my room. I will also keep my room tidy at all times. I will put my things away in the living room so that my stuff will not be there and that will stay like that forever.
I hope that I have convinced you and will think about what you have just read. I hope that I can get my room painted sometime soon. The holidays I think would be the ideal time to do it. I do really, really hope that I have convinced you enough. I can’t wait to hear your reply.
kind regards
~Eva~
Dear Mumma and John,
I’m writing to you because I’m persuading you to get me a tablet.
The first reason why I should be allowed a tablet is that I could do the grocery shopping on it. It would save you time and you wouldn’t have to go to the supermarket. Also John wouldn’t have to go the supermarket so that he could came home from work and relax and watch the news.
My second reason why I should get a tablet is that I could check the weather every morning on the weather app for you. This would be good so you don’t have to check the forecast on the tv. If the weather was too bad the tv might not work and you wouldn’t know what the forecast was. If you couldn’t check it you could get wet or too hot.
My third reason for getting a tablet is that when Mumma wants to search something on Google I could do it for her because she might get a bit stuck. When I search things up on it I would get as smart as a t-rex hunting for it’s prey. Instead of Mumma ringing John I could help her. If she had to search it herself she would have to leave Lilly because Lilly could start crying.
Now that you have read the letter I hope that you are convinced enough to get me a tablet.
Love from Finn
Persuasive Letter
Dear Lucy,
I’m going to persuade you that hockey is way way better than cricket. At the end of this letter you will think hockey is 100% better than cricket!
My first reason is that in cricket you are more on your own and in hockey you play more as a team. There are only three people involved in cricket, when you’re batting, the two batters and one bowler, the rest of the team is on the bench or standing around on the side. In hockey you’re all involved not just three people. In hockey you have a chance of getting the ball and working more as a team not just hogging the ball yourself. When everyone is involved you can score more goals and have more fun playing with your team.
Now this is my next reason that hockey is better than cricket, in hockey there’s someone backing you up. When you’re in trouble you can pass it to another person in your team so you can help each other out and get passed the other team.You can’t in cricket because it’s only you and the other person in the other team and nobody is helping you so you are all alone and could score no points for your team you will feel really bad.
My last reason is that hockey is easier to learn than cricket.bowling is hard to aim because you don’t know where it’s going to go. hitting the ball is impossible to hit because you have to get the timing right. Catching the ball hurts and you might get scared to catch it and the other team could get more points .In hockey it’s easy to hit the ball because it’s on the ground not in the air, aiming the ball somewhere is easy because you just aim a different direction to hit to your team. You catch the ball with your stick so it won’t hurt.
In this letter I have told you that in hockey you get to work more as a team than in cricket and everyone is involved in the game. Hopefully I have persuaded you that hockey is better than cricket. I look forward to hearing what you think is better now.
from Harriet
Persuasive Letter
Dear Mum and Dad
This is a once in a lifetime opportunity to get a bit of peace and quiet at home! Can I go to Finn C-W’s house for a sleepover? By the time you have read this you will say yes.
First of all it would save electricity because my electric blanket and my light would not be on. I would also not be having a shower so it would save hot water. Really, it could take some money off the power bill. It might not seem like much but it is still a saving. If it does save you money you will be glad I went! Now to the second reason.
My second reason is that it would also be A LOT more quiet because I wouldn't be running around the house yahooing with loud music on! Harry might make some noise but it won't be as noisy as normal. Its because when I’m with Harry he is so noisy but when I’m not he's not so noisy. Now for the third reason.
I think it would be easier to look after 2 kids than 3. It would be as easy as pie because I eat the most so you would not need to make dinner or breakfast for me and wouldn’t need to wary about me getting all my jobs done. You also might not get mixed up with Issy and Harry!
Now that you have read my persuasive letter you know why it would be a great thing to go to Finn C-W’s house. Because of all my great reasons, you can’t say no.
from Jake.
Why the Black Caps are better than Australia at cricket
Dear people of Australia,
Today I will be writing a letter to you on why the Black Caps are better than Australia at cricket.
At the end of this letter I am sure you will be convinced of my argument.
My first good reason that the Black Caps are better than Australia at cricket is that the Black Caps show better sportsmanship than Australia. Here is some evidence to back it up. Like how after the match against South Africa in the semi final of the World Cup , AB De Villiers got out and Brendon Mccullum gave AB Devillers a handshake, congratulated him on how well South Africa did. When Grant Elliot got out for NZ, the Australians were sledging him.
My second good reason is how well we play as a team. Here are some examples to show you what I mean. Like when we played Australia and we only won by one run but we all played as a team how Grant Elliott, Corey Anderson did that amazing partnership together. How Tim Southee, Trent Boult gave each other tips on how to bowl a bit better.
My third good reason is the outstanding players we have compared to Australia. Here are some players I’m talking about. Like Martin Guptill got 221 runs in one game and he got most runs in the Cricket World Cup. Tim Southee got 7 wickets in one game. Trent Boult got second most wickets in the Cricket World Cup. Trent Boult can bowl as fast as a cheetah.
I hope after reading my convincing letter that you now know that the Black Caps are at least a little bit better than Australia because of all the things we do as a team.
From Jamie Goodgame.
Persuasive writing
Dear Dad,
I know I’ve talked to you about this several times, but after this letter you’ll be convinced that we should get a turtle instead of another dog.
The first reason why we should get a turtle instead of another dog is...turtles are more gentle than dogs. Can you imagine walking down the street and a dog comes up and bowls you over? Well I can. Whereas if you had a pet turtle it wouldn’t bowl you over because they’re really slow. Turtles aren’t as energetic as dogs so they don’t jump around as much as a dog would.
My second reason is… That I will clean up after the turtle no matter what. I’ll feed it, I’ll take it out and play with it and I will clean its tank and I’ll clean his/her shell whenever it gets dirty. If we get another dog there will be extra poo on the lawn, where if you had a pet turtle there wouldn’t be extras all over the place because they will be in the tank where the turtle will stay.
My third reason why we should get a turtle instead of another dog is…Turtles are much quieter than dog, so if you get a dog it might bark all night, so we don’t get much sleep. The bad thing about it is the neighbours might get angry at us they might not want to live next door.
Guess what? You can pick his tank and what it eats. But I shall pick the name that’s only if you agree. Turtles are as slow as sloths so the good thing about turtles is that they don’t come out of their tank so you don’t have to walk them. You could even play with him with me! We could play hide and seek, monopoly and many others.
I hope my letter exploded in your face like a bomb and blew the answer out of you, and maybe by the end of the year there will be a turtle in my room that goes by the name of Shelley or Bolt
~Love from Kegan~
Persuasive Writing
Dear Sammy,
I know you probably think that netball is better than hockey. I hope that by the end of this letter you will change your mind and agree with me that hockey is better than netball. When you get a hockey stick and play you can not put it down because it is as fun as eating chocolate. I bet you will agree with me, and you will thank me for days .
My first strong reason that hockey is better than netball is that you do a lot more running around the pitch than on the netball court. If you play hockey the pitches are a lot bigger than netball courts if you put two full netball courts you get one half of a hockey field that means if you put four netball courts together you get one full hockey pitch which seems humongous to me and probably to you as well.
My second strong reason is that hockey is a more active sport than netball. For hockey you don’t have to hold the ball. There are three different steps, number one you only need to dribble the ball to throw it and then the other team gets the ball, number two in netball it is quite hard to keep the ball not going out however, in hockey you can use your stick to keep it from going out. Number three you play halves NOT quarters in hockey which makes the game feel a lot longer than a netball game. Well that is my opinion on that!
My third strong reason is that it is quite hard to score goals in netball and it is as easy as saying hello to someone in hockey because all you need to do is hit the ball at the goal. In netball you need to be able to shoot and be goal shoot. For hockey your whole team can score accept your goalie because she/he are all armoured up in the goalie gear. This is all squishy and hard, the only thing they can feel is the vibration of the hockey ball.
I hope after you read this you will change your sport to hockey, rather than netball. I hope I see your name is on the hockey sign up sheets. Will you be in my hockey team?
Kind regards,
~Lucy~
Persuasive Writing
Dear Mrs Hanson and Room 23,
I know you all love meat but I’m about to persuade you all to try to be a vegetarian!
My first reason for you to try be a vegetarian is that people don’t treat animals very nicely. If you become a vegetarian you will save lots of animals’ lives. They sometimes get kept in tiny places and get squished to death! On their way to the place where they get killed they’re also squashed because they put too many animals together in a very small space.
My second reason is that the world would be a much more happy place if we were all vegetarian. Obviously the animals would be happier because they would be alive and butchers would be happier because they wouldn’t have to chop up dead animals every day. It would probably be hard for farmers to send their animals, that they had looked after away. Did you know animals have feelings just like people? If someone hurts them then they feel hurt. Just because we are bigger and stronger than they are doesn't make it ok to hurt them! How would you feel if you were one of those animals?
My third reason that you should be a vegetarian is it’s really healthy! You end up eating a lot of fruit and veg. I do miss sausages and burgers but there are veggie burgers and sausages! (They are as yummy as a real piece of meat!) A great thing about vegetarian is you get more handfuls of the things that are good for you. You also get to try new food! If you're a person who likes challenges, then being a vegetarian is a great challenge to try. I can’t wait to see how many of you are going to try it
from Millie
persuasive writing
Dear Mum and Dad,
Ok I know that we have talked about this a lot, but I know that after you’ve read this letter, you will let me go to bed at 8:30pm instead of 7pm. Here are my three reasons for my letter.
My first argument about why I should go to bed later is with my bed time now I don’t have enough time to do everything I need to. My bedtime now doesn’t give me enough time to finish my homework. I don’t even have enough time to think about my work and put detail into it. I also don’t have enough time to read which will help my English get better. I just don’t have time to help Mum with jobs that she does. If I went to bed later I could do things like vacuum the house. Now my second reason is coming up, be ready!
My second reason to go to bed later is that at my bedtime now is way too early and how will I go to sleep? Sometimes I find it really hard to go to sleep because my eyes just don’t close when I want them to, in fact I don’t even feel sleepy and I don’t need all that time to go to sleep. At the moment I sleep at 7:00 and wake up at 7:30 which is 12 and a half hours that is way too much sleep.
Now my final best,third reason is now I am 10 ,not a baby that should go to bed early. My friend's parents let them go to bed at 8:30, so why can’t I? It’s not like I should be forced to go to sleep, but now I’m nearly a teenager and teenagers like my big brother go to sleep about 9:30. I’m only asking for 8:30! That’s why I should allowed to go to bed a bit later.
Hopefully you have thought about my three reasons and I have convinced you that I should be allowed to go to bed at 8:30 not at 7:00. It would make me very, very happy if you could do this at least for your daughter’s sake.
Kind regards,
Your daughter Nisha Biswa
Persuasive Writing: Why I should be allowed $2 a week for pocket money
Dear Mum and Dad,
I am going to tell you some things that will make a lot of ‘cents’. Need help in the house? Then I should be allowed $2 a week for pocket money and I hope by the end of this letter you are highly convinced. Turn the coin and we’ll see what it lands on.
My first strong reason is because I’ll donate $2 a month for people like the Ronald McDonald house and other charities. This will make me feel warm inside like I’m under thick layers of blankets, for not keeping the money to myself. I’ll learn a lesson to care about other people not just myself, this could help at school and in my future life. I know people can go crazy with money and buy sweets, but I won’t because it’s bad for my health; I’d rather spend it on helping other people making them smile as I hum happily.
Reason two, is that if you need to borrow money, you’ll have no problems, we can can make an agreement on that. Just ask it with me and it can be done. No hassle about going to the bank you can just open my piggy bank and its done but please ask permission. This also allows my brother to borrow as well but he can’t go overboard. I’ll keep a piggy bank with all my coins in it and not stack it too high as soon as it does I’ll donate it immediately to the charities I talked about.
Lastly, having pocket money could give me great practice with maths. For example, when giving a shopkeeper more money than needed you will get change. Estimating what the change would be or using original knowledge to work out the equation that is in front of me. The more I practice the better I’ll be when it comes to maths at school and the future. Sometimes money is challenging as it comes out in notes, cents and dollars. I want to understand them as they are classified as what I call ‘brain errors’. To improve my learning with money this will take time but I know you can be patient as you were waiting for my first baby steps.
Now you can let me do some work like the dishes around the house, I won’t break a pot or glass cup maybe give me supervision. Now you’re convinced admit it. I promise I’ll share until my heart thrives with life, this is doing myself a favour by filling up someone’s bucket making me smile. I’ll show respect with money and treat it like it’s shiny gold and rare as crystals.
Sincerely, your loving daughter,
~Olivia Towns~
Persuasive Writing
Dear Mum and Dad,
I know we have gone through this several times, but I need my own room! So through this writing I’m going to persuade you why I should get my own room.
My first reason why I should get my own room is Tyler snore and because he’s in the same room as me I can’t get any sleep! Then I stay up until 10 o'clock or something. Then when I wake up, I’m really tired and can’t do much. Then I can’t help you do the dishes or make your coffee. Also I find it hard to do my school work at school because I’m too tired.
Now my second reason why I should get my own room is it will be more quiet. Right now Tyler and I just fight. So if I get my own room we won’t be able to fight. Which means you can watch your movies without heaps of noise. Then we can also play with the other kids so they are not too loud. If I get my own room you won’t have to hear me and Tyler arguing.
Now my last reason why I should get my own room is I would keep my room tidy. I know you have been wanting that for ages. So if I get my own room it will be more tidy, because most of the stuff is Tyler’s only some stuff is mine. Even better if i get a small room I won’t need so much stuff. So we can donate some stuff to charity.
Now I hope that you understand why I need my own room. I’ll look forward to seeing some of my things in my own room and Tyler’s things in his own room.
Love Ryan Andrews
Persuasive Letter
Dear Room 23,
Hey do I hear someone playing the best sport by far in the world? I think I do! Today I’m going to convince you that hockey is better than any other sport.
My first reason why hockey is better than any other sport is that you don’t get muddy at all in hockey. When I get home from hockey I’m as clean as a piece of paper that has just come out the packet! In a sport like rugby because it’s played on the grass it gets quite muddy and you can slip over very easily. In hockey it can’t really get muddy because hockey is played on the turf full stop. Well sometimes it’s played on grass but not often but anyway now I’ll now talk to you about my second reason.
My second reason is hockey is pretty easy to learn. Sports like cricket, tennis and rugby are quite hard to learn because they have so many more rules. In tennis you’ve got to hit the ball at the exact right time. How do you do that? Now to rugby. What do all tries mean? How do you pass this in? In hockey all you have to do is pass the ball from player to player and try to score a goal. You have a whole lot of fun. I will now tell you about my third reason.
My third reason is that there is no huge puddles on the hockey turf. For other sports, on the grass or a court there can be huge puddles that you splash in and get completely wet. I don’t want to get wet and I don’t think you do either. So I’d start playing hockey if I were you.
Now that you’ve heard about my three reasons I hope I’ve convinced you that there will mostly be hockey lovers in Room 23 this year.
Kind Regards,
Phoebe Spear
Persuasive Letter
Dear Room 23,
I know you all might think NZ is the best country but I’m here to tell you about why America is better than NZ.
My first reason on why America is better than NZ is that there are many different states and each state has their own thing to do. Like California, it has many different cool theme parks. NZ only has one theme park in Auckland. There are many things to do in America for all kinds of people but NZ is for hiking, sailing and for adventurous families.
Now I’ve told you about my first reason, so now it’s time for my second reason which is on some more sports that you can play in America but not in NZ. Like if you are a hockey player, ice hockey is for you, if you want a challenge than you should try it. Ice hockey is a big sport and is played all over America. If you like baseball than you should come over because almost every city has a baseball stadium. In Summer you can go to a pool and in Winter you can go to an indoor waterpark.The waterparks are as thrilling as jumping off a cliff.
If I haven’t convinced you then this paragraph will! In NZ there is only fish and chips plus lots of seafood, in America there are lots of different foods to try like Mexican, Italian, American and seafood. Like I said earlier each state has their own culture they also have their own food taste. For example where I am from Minnesota there is ice fishing, Italian, Mexican and of course America.
I hope after reading my letter you know that America is better than NZ. I hope you come after thinking about how America is better.
Kind Regards, Paige
Persuasive Letter
Dear Dad
Look dad I know we’ve gone through this several times but I don’t think we should get a dog. That is why I’m going to try to convince you enough to not get a dog. Trust me, once I’ve finished with you, you won't want to get a dog.
Here are some of my reasons why we shouldn't get a dog. Reason one is that the dog will poop everywhere. Around the garden and around other people’s houses. Just so you know I will not go round picking it up! You will have to!
My second really convincing reason is probably going to be very loud one. If we did get a dog Ava would definitely scream every time she saw it, because she hates dogs. Plus you don’t want to hear her scream, she screams as loud as an elephant stomping all over the place! If we did get a dog it might bark in the middle of the night and wake everyone up. Anyway Ava’s not the only little girl who hates dogs. If I have not already convinced you enough with evidence, my last one will surely do the trick.
Here is my final reason, you will have to exercise the dog yourself and I know you hate to exercise dogs! If we got a dog you would have to take it for walks every day and it wouldn’t leave you much free time. Also, If we did get a dog it would cost a lot of money, and I know cats cost a lot but most cats find their own food including our one so that means we don’t have to buy cat food much. But dogs on the other hand, they don’t.
I hope that you now realise that having a dog is way harder than having a cat and harder than having a monkey if you ask me. Just have a big think about that. I hope that I have now convinced you enough to not get a dog. I hope not to see a big cute thing running around the house. I can’t wait to hear your reply.
Love from your boy who hates dogs,
Zach
Persuasive Writing
Why cats are better than dogs
Dear Mrs Hanson and Room 23,
I will tell you why cats are better than dogs. I will share some really good reasons with you.
My first reason why cats are better than dogs is that cats are easier to look after than dogs. You don’t need to wash cats because they wash themselves with their tounge. To wash a dog you need a hose, dog shampoo, a bath and lots of water. Washing a dog makes a big mess and it takes a long time. Do you think dogs like being washed? I don’t think so! You don’t need any equipment or time to wash a cat. Also cats don’t need to be walked ,they walk themselves while dogs pull and pull until you fall over on the soft green grass or on the rock hard concrete.
My second reason why cats are better than dogs is that cats don’t make a lot of noise very often. Imagine reading a newspaper while a dog barks as loud as a roaring lion in your ear. The only noises a cat makes is a soft purr and a quiet meow.
My third reason why cats are better than dogs is that cats don’t make dirty messes. Would you want to have a dirty and messy dog inside your house that you just cleaned causing trouble? (Of course not). The worst part is if you leave them outside they’ll bulldoze your garden and poo in it ! If you want a clean house then get a cat.
Maybe most people think dogs are great pets and cats aren’t ,but some dogs are a lot more naughty. Some people like cats and have one or more and they have lots of fun with them.Cats are cute, cuddly and very playful.
I hope you enjoyed my reasons why cats are better than dogs. So what are you going to get a pet a dog or a cat?
by Benjamin Robertson
Persuasive letter
Dear Mum,
I’m writing this letter specifically because I don’t think I should have to do jobs around the house. I hope that you could be reasonable enough to see the good side of me being more freed up and have more time to be doing other things.
My first reason Is you're always worried about me getting sick. If I had to go out into the cold ice box air and empty the compost or get the mail, I might catch a cold. I fear If I touch the compost I might get sick or even worse catch a disease!
Convinced yet? My second reason for not doing any jobs Is that I would have more free time. If I had more free time I could baby-sit Grace while you and Billy can go out and do whatever you want while Grace and I will be perfectly fine and happy at home. I could get more homework done than I ever have, this will also improve my chances for passing the test and possibly getting into the inquiry classes at Cobham.
Now my final reason. Doing jobs makes me tired. If I do my jobs I would have to go to bed really late meaning I would get extremely tired and would most likely wake up late leading to me being behind at school!
Now, I would expect that you would have a think about this and I'm hoping to hear the most hated sentence I've ever heard and that Is… time to do your JOBS!
From your most appreciative son
Jarelle
Persuasive letter
Dear Mum,
I need to talk to you about something. Why can’t I paint my room a different colour? I have talked to Dad about this many times and he has said yes but you said no. Anyway here are my reasons why I should be able to paint my room a different colour.
My first reason that I should be able to paint my room a different colour is that I don't like the colour of it now. it is a pinky colour. You know that my room is pink and I really don’t like that colour (I would change it to blue like the sky). Blue is my favourite colour and it will always be. So then I would not have to change it ever again. I will also like the new change. So that is my first reason.
My second reason that I should change my room is that I will do most of the work. Dad only has to help a little bit on the ceiling,the high bits of the walls and the edges of the door ways. I can do the rest. It won’t be a hassle. I can chose the colour of the paint myself. You won’t even have to be down in my room with me! If I haven't already convinced you enough my last reason will definitely do the trick!
My next reason is that I will do lots of jobs. I will do the dishwasher for 2 weeks by myself and any other jobs that you need done (eg. washing windows,weeding) and for free (that is a great deal) if you let me paint my room. I will also keep my room tidy at all times. I will put my things away in the living room so that my stuff will not be there and that will stay like that forever.
I hope that I have convinced you and will think about what you have just read. I hope that I can get my room painted sometime soon. The holidays I think would be the ideal time to do it. I do really, really hope that I have convinced you enough. I can’t wait to hear your reply.
kind regards
~Eva~
Dear Mumma and John,
I’m writing to you because I’m persuading you to get me a tablet.
The first reason why I should be allowed a tablet is that I could do the grocery shopping on it. It would save you time and you wouldn’t have to go to the supermarket. Also John wouldn’t have to go the supermarket so that he could came home from work and relax and watch the news.
My second reason why I should get a tablet is that I could check the weather every morning on the weather app for you. This would be good so you don’t have to check the forecast on the tv. If the weather was too bad the tv might not work and you wouldn’t know what the forecast was. If you couldn’t check it you could get wet or too hot.
My third reason for getting a tablet is that when Mumma wants to search something on Google I could do it for her because she might get a bit stuck. When I search things up on it I would get as smart as a t-rex hunting for it’s prey. Instead of Mumma ringing John I could help her. If she had to search it herself she would have to leave Lilly because Lilly could start crying.
Now that you have read the letter I hope that you are convinced enough to get me a tablet.
Love from Finn
Persuasive Letter
Dear Lucy,
I’m going to persuade you that hockey is way way better than cricket. At the end of this letter you will think hockey is 100% better than cricket!
My first reason is that in cricket you are more on your own and in hockey you play more as a team. There are only three people involved in cricket, when you’re batting, the two batters and one bowler, the rest of the team is on the bench or standing around on the side. In hockey you’re all involved not just three people. In hockey you have a chance of getting the ball and working more as a team not just hogging the ball yourself. When everyone is involved you can score more goals and have more fun playing with your team.
Now this is my next reason that hockey is better than cricket, in hockey there’s someone backing you up. When you’re in trouble you can pass it to another person in your team so you can help each other out and get passed the other team.You can’t in cricket because it’s only you and the other person in the other team and nobody is helping you so you are all alone and could score no points for your team you will feel really bad.
My last reason is that hockey is easier to learn than cricket.bowling is hard to aim because you don’t know where it’s going to go. hitting the ball is impossible to hit because you have to get the timing right. Catching the ball hurts and you might get scared to catch it and the other team could get more points .In hockey it’s easy to hit the ball because it’s on the ground not in the air, aiming the ball somewhere is easy because you just aim a different direction to hit to your team. You catch the ball with your stick so it won’t hurt.
In this letter I have told you that in hockey you get to work more as a team than in cricket and everyone is involved in the game. Hopefully I have persuaded you that hockey is better than cricket. I look forward to hearing what you think is better now.
from Harriet
Persuasive Letter
Dear Mum and Dad
This is a once in a lifetime opportunity to get a bit of peace and quiet at home! Can I go to Finn C-W’s house for a sleepover? By the time you have read this you will say yes.
First of all it would save electricity because my electric blanket and my light would not be on. I would also not be having a shower so it would save hot water. Really, it could take some money off the power bill. It might not seem like much but it is still a saving. If it does save you money you will be glad I went! Now to the second reason.
My second reason is that it would also be A LOT more quiet because I wouldn't be running around the house yahooing with loud music on! Harry might make some noise but it won't be as noisy as normal. Its because when I’m with Harry he is so noisy but when I’m not he's not so noisy. Now for the third reason.
I think it would be easier to look after 2 kids than 3. It would be as easy as pie because I eat the most so you would not need to make dinner or breakfast for me and wouldn’t need to wary about me getting all my jobs done. You also might not get mixed up with Issy and Harry!
Now that you have read my persuasive letter you know why it would be a great thing to go to Finn C-W’s house. Because of all my great reasons, you can’t say no.
from Jake.
Why the Black Caps are better than Australia at cricket
Dear people of Australia,
Today I will be writing a letter to you on why the Black Caps are better than Australia at cricket.
At the end of this letter I am sure you will be convinced of my argument.
My first good reason that the Black Caps are better than Australia at cricket is that the Black Caps show better sportsmanship than Australia. Here is some evidence to back it up. Like how after the match against South Africa in the semi final of the World Cup , AB De Villiers got out and Brendon Mccullum gave AB Devillers a handshake, congratulated him on how well South Africa did. When Grant Elliot got out for NZ, the Australians were sledging him.
My second good reason is how well we play as a team. Here are some examples to show you what I mean. Like when we played Australia and we only won by one run but we all played as a team how Grant Elliott, Corey Anderson did that amazing partnership together. How Tim Southee, Trent Boult gave each other tips on how to bowl a bit better.
My third good reason is the outstanding players we have compared to Australia. Here are some players I’m talking about. Like Martin Guptill got 221 runs in one game and he got most runs in the Cricket World Cup. Tim Southee got 7 wickets in one game. Trent Boult got second most wickets in the Cricket World Cup. Trent Boult can bowl as fast as a cheetah.
I hope after reading my convincing letter that you now know that the Black Caps are at least a little bit better than Australia because of all the things we do as a team.
From Jamie Goodgame.
Persuasive writing
Dear Dad,
I know I’ve talked to you about this several times, but after this letter you’ll be convinced that we should get a turtle instead of another dog.
The first reason why we should get a turtle instead of another dog is...turtles are more gentle than dogs. Can you imagine walking down the street and a dog comes up and bowls you over? Well I can. Whereas if you had a pet turtle it wouldn’t bowl you over because they’re really slow. Turtles aren’t as energetic as dogs so they don’t jump around as much as a dog would.
My second reason is… That I will clean up after the turtle no matter what. I’ll feed it, I’ll take it out and play with it and I will clean its tank and I’ll clean his/her shell whenever it gets dirty. If we get another dog there will be extra poo on the lawn, where if you had a pet turtle there wouldn’t be extras all over the place because they will be in the tank where the turtle will stay.
My third reason why we should get a turtle instead of another dog is…Turtles are much quieter than dog, so if you get a dog it might bark all night, so we don’t get much sleep. The bad thing about it is the neighbours might get angry at us they might not want to live next door.
Guess what? You can pick his tank and what it eats. But I shall pick the name that’s only if you agree. Turtles are as slow as sloths so the good thing about turtles is that they don’t come out of their tank so you don’t have to walk them. You could even play with him with me! We could play hide and seek, monopoly and many others.
I hope my letter exploded in your face like a bomb and blew the answer out of you, and maybe by the end of the year there will be a turtle in my room that goes by the name of Shelley or Bolt
~Love from Kegan~
Persuasive Writing
Dear Sammy,
I know you probably think that netball is better than hockey. I hope that by the end of this letter you will change your mind and agree with me that hockey is better than netball. When you get a hockey stick and play you can not put it down because it is as fun as eating chocolate. I bet you will agree with me, and you will thank me for days .
My first strong reason that hockey is better than netball is that you do a lot more running around the pitch than on the netball court. If you play hockey the pitches are a lot bigger than netball courts if you put two full netball courts you get one half of a hockey field that means if you put four netball courts together you get one full hockey pitch which seems humongous to me and probably to you as well.
My second strong reason is that hockey is a more active sport than netball. For hockey you don’t have to hold the ball. There are three different steps, number one you only need to dribble the ball to throw it and then the other team gets the ball, number two in netball it is quite hard to keep the ball not going out however, in hockey you can use your stick to keep it from going out. Number three you play halves NOT quarters in hockey which makes the game feel a lot longer than a netball game. Well that is my opinion on that!
My third strong reason is that it is quite hard to score goals in netball and it is as easy as saying hello to someone in hockey because all you need to do is hit the ball at the goal. In netball you need to be able to shoot and be goal shoot. For hockey your whole team can score accept your goalie because she/he are all armoured up in the goalie gear. This is all squishy and hard, the only thing they can feel is the vibration of the hockey ball.
I hope after you read this you will change your sport to hockey, rather than netball. I hope I see your name is on the hockey sign up sheets. Will you be in my hockey team?
Kind regards,
~Lucy~
Persuasive Writing
Dear Mrs Hanson and Room 23,
I know you all love meat but I’m about to persuade you all to try to be a vegetarian!
My first reason for you to try be a vegetarian is that people don’t treat animals very nicely. If you become a vegetarian you will save lots of animals’ lives. They sometimes get kept in tiny places and get squished to death! On their way to the place where they get killed they’re also squashed because they put too many animals together in a very small space.
My second reason is that the world would be a much more happy place if we were all vegetarian. Obviously the animals would be happier because they would be alive and butchers would be happier because they wouldn’t have to chop up dead animals every day. It would probably be hard for farmers to send their animals, that they had looked after away. Did you know animals have feelings just like people? If someone hurts them then they feel hurt. Just because we are bigger and stronger than they are doesn't make it ok to hurt them! How would you feel if you were one of those animals?
My third reason that you should be a vegetarian is it’s really healthy! You end up eating a lot of fruit and veg. I do miss sausages and burgers but there are veggie burgers and sausages! (They are as yummy as a real piece of meat!) A great thing about vegetarian is you get more handfuls of the things that are good for you. You also get to try new food! If you're a person who likes challenges, then being a vegetarian is a great challenge to try. I can’t wait to see how many of you are going to try it
from Millie
persuasive writing
Dear Mum and Dad,
Ok I know that we have talked about this a lot, but I know that after you’ve read this letter, you will let me go to bed at 8:30pm instead of 7pm. Here are my three reasons for my letter.
My first argument about why I should go to bed later is with my bed time now I don’t have enough time to do everything I need to. My bedtime now doesn’t give me enough time to finish my homework. I don’t even have enough time to think about my work and put detail into it. I also don’t have enough time to read which will help my English get better. I just don’t have time to help Mum with jobs that she does. If I went to bed later I could do things like vacuum the house. Now my second reason is coming up, be ready!
My second reason to go to bed later is that at my bedtime now is way too early and how will I go to sleep? Sometimes I find it really hard to go to sleep because my eyes just don’t close when I want them to, in fact I don’t even feel sleepy and I don’t need all that time to go to sleep. At the moment I sleep at 7:00 and wake up at 7:30 which is 12 and a half hours that is way too much sleep.
Now my final best,third reason is now I am 10 ,not a baby that should go to bed early. My friend's parents let them go to bed at 8:30, so why can’t I? It’s not like I should be forced to go to sleep, but now I’m nearly a teenager and teenagers like my big brother go to sleep about 9:30. I’m only asking for 8:30! That’s why I should allowed to go to bed a bit later.
Hopefully you have thought about my three reasons and I have convinced you that I should be allowed to go to bed at 8:30 not at 7:00. It would make me very, very happy if you could do this at least for your daughter’s sake.
Kind regards,
Your daughter Nisha Biswa
Persuasive Writing: Why I should be allowed $2 a week for pocket money
Dear Mum and Dad,
I am going to tell you some things that will make a lot of ‘cents’. Need help in the house? Then I should be allowed $2 a week for pocket money and I hope by the end of this letter you are highly convinced. Turn the coin and we’ll see what it lands on.
My first strong reason is because I’ll donate $2 a month for people like the Ronald McDonald house and other charities. This will make me feel warm inside like I’m under thick layers of blankets, for not keeping the money to myself. I’ll learn a lesson to care about other people not just myself, this could help at school and in my future life. I know people can go crazy with money and buy sweets, but I won’t because it’s bad for my health; I’d rather spend it on helping other people making them smile as I hum happily.
Reason two, is that if you need to borrow money, you’ll have no problems, we can can make an agreement on that. Just ask it with me and it can be done. No hassle about going to the bank you can just open my piggy bank and its done but please ask permission. This also allows my brother to borrow as well but he can’t go overboard. I’ll keep a piggy bank with all my coins in it and not stack it too high as soon as it does I’ll donate it immediately to the charities I talked about.
Lastly, having pocket money could give me great practice with maths. For example, when giving a shopkeeper more money than needed you will get change. Estimating what the change would be or using original knowledge to work out the equation that is in front of me. The more I practice the better I’ll be when it comes to maths at school and the future. Sometimes money is challenging as it comes out in notes, cents and dollars. I want to understand them as they are classified as what I call ‘brain errors’. To improve my learning with money this will take time but I know you can be patient as you were waiting for my first baby steps.
Now you can let me do some work like the dishes around the house, I won’t break a pot or glass cup maybe give me supervision. Now you’re convinced admit it. I promise I’ll share until my heart thrives with life, this is doing myself a favour by filling up someone’s bucket making me smile. I’ll show respect with money and treat it like it’s shiny gold and rare as crystals.
Sincerely, your loving daughter,
~Olivia Towns~
Persuasive Writing
Dear Mum and Dad,
I know we have gone through this several times, but I need my own room! So through this writing I’m going to persuade you why I should get my own room.
My first reason why I should get my own room is Tyler snore and because he’s in the same room as me I can’t get any sleep! Then I stay up until 10 o'clock or something. Then when I wake up, I’m really tired and can’t do much. Then I can’t help you do the dishes or make your coffee. Also I find it hard to do my school work at school because I’m too tired.
Now my second reason why I should get my own room is it will be more quiet. Right now Tyler and I just fight. So if I get my own room we won’t be able to fight. Which means you can watch your movies without heaps of noise. Then we can also play with the other kids so they are not too loud. If I get my own room you won’t have to hear me and Tyler arguing.
Now my last reason why I should get my own room is I would keep my room tidy. I know you have been wanting that for ages. So if I get my own room it will be more tidy, because most of the stuff is Tyler’s only some stuff is mine. Even better if i get a small room I won’t need so much stuff. So we can donate some stuff to charity.
Now I hope that you understand why I need my own room. I’ll look forward to seeing some of my things in my own room and Tyler’s things in his own room.
Love Ryan Andrews
Persuasive Letter
Dear Room 23,
Hey do I hear someone playing the best sport by far in the world? I think I do! Today I’m going to convince you that hockey is better than any other sport.
My first reason why hockey is better than any other sport is that you don’t get muddy at all in hockey. When I get home from hockey I’m as clean as a piece of paper that has just come out the packet! In a sport like rugby because it’s played on the grass it gets quite muddy and you can slip over very easily. In hockey it can’t really get muddy because hockey is played on the turf full stop. Well sometimes it’s played on grass but not often but anyway now I’ll now talk to you about my second reason.
My second reason is hockey is pretty easy to learn. Sports like cricket, tennis and rugby are quite hard to learn because they have so many more rules. In tennis you’ve got to hit the ball at the exact right time. How do you do that? Now to rugby. What do all tries mean? How do you pass this in? In hockey all you have to do is pass the ball from player to player and try to score a goal. You have a whole lot of fun. I will now tell you about my third reason.
My third reason is that there is no huge puddles on the hockey turf. For other sports, on the grass or a court there can be huge puddles that you splash in and get completely wet. I don’t want to get wet and I don’t think you do either. So I’d start playing hockey if I were you.
Now that you’ve heard about my three reasons I hope I’ve convinced you that there will mostly be hockey lovers in Room 23 this year.
Kind Regards,
Phoebe Spear
Persuasive Letter
Dear Room 23,
I know you all might think NZ is the best country but I’m here to tell you about why America is better than NZ.
My first reason on why America is better than NZ is that there are many different states and each state has their own thing to do. Like California, it has many different cool theme parks. NZ only has one theme park in Auckland. There are many things to do in America for all kinds of people but NZ is for hiking, sailing and for adventurous families.
Now I’ve told you about my first reason, so now it’s time for my second reason which is on some more sports that you can play in America but not in NZ. Like if you are a hockey player, ice hockey is for you, if you want a challenge than you should try it. Ice hockey is a big sport and is played all over America. If you like baseball than you should come over because almost every city has a baseball stadium. In Summer you can go to a pool and in Winter you can go to an indoor waterpark.The waterparks are as thrilling as jumping off a cliff.
If I haven’t convinced you then this paragraph will! In NZ there is only fish and chips plus lots of seafood, in America there are lots of different foods to try like Mexican, Italian, American and seafood. Like I said earlier each state has their own culture they also have their own food taste. For example where I am from Minnesota there is ice fishing, Italian, Mexican and of course America.
I hope after reading my letter you know that America is better than NZ. I hope you come after thinking about how America is better.
Kind Regards, Paige
Persuasive Letter
Dear Dad
Look dad I know we’ve gone through this several times but I don’t think we should get a dog. That is why I’m going to try to convince you enough to not get a dog. Trust me, once I’ve finished with you, you won't want to get a dog.
Here are some of my reasons why we shouldn't get a dog. Reason one is that the dog will poop everywhere. Around the garden and around other people’s houses. Just so you know I will not go round picking it up! You will have to!
My second really convincing reason is probably going to be very loud one. If we did get a dog Ava would definitely scream every time she saw it, because she hates dogs. Plus you don’t want to hear her scream, she screams as loud as an elephant stomping all over the place! If we did get a dog it might bark in the middle of the night and wake everyone up. Anyway Ava’s not the only little girl who hates dogs. If I have not already convinced you enough with evidence, my last one will surely do the trick.
Here is my final reason, you will have to exercise the dog yourself and I know you hate to exercise dogs! If we got a dog you would have to take it for walks every day and it wouldn’t leave you much free time. Also, If we did get a dog it would cost a lot of money, and I know cats cost a lot but most cats find their own food including our one so that means we don’t have to buy cat food much. But dogs on the other hand, they don’t.
I hope that you now realise that having a dog is way harder than having a cat and harder than having a monkey if you ask me. Just have a big think about that. I hope that I have now convinced you enough to not get a dog. I hope not to see a big cute thing running around the house. I can’t wait to hear your reply.
Love from your boy who hates dogs,
Zach
Persuasive Writing
Why cats are better than dogs
Dear Mrs Hanson and Room 23,
I will tell you why cats are better than dogs. I will share some really good reasons with you.
My first reason why cats are better than dogs is that cats are easier to look after than dogs. You don’t need to wash cats because they wash themselves with their tounge. To wash a dog you need a hose, dog shampoo, a bath and lots of water. Washing a dog makes a big mess and it takes a long time. Do you think dogs like being washed? I don’t think so! You don’t need any equipment or time to wash a cat. Also cats don’t need to be walked ,they walk themselves while dogs pull and pull until you fall over on the soft green grass or on the rock hard concrete.
My second reason why cats are better than dogs is that cats don’t make a lot of noise very often. Imagine reading a newspaper while a dog barks as loud as a roaring lion in your ear. The only noises a cat makes is a soft purr and a quiet meow.
My third reason why cats are better than dogs is that cats don’t make dirty messes. Would you want to have a dirty and messy dog inside your house that you just cleaned causing trouble? (Of course not). The worst part is if you leave them outside they’ll bulldoze your garden and poo in it ! If you want a clean house then get a cat.
Maybe most people think dogs are great pets and cats aren’t ,but some dogs are a lot more naughty. Some people like cats and have one or more and they have lots of fun with them.Cats are cute, cuddly and very playful.
I hope you enjoyed my reasons why cats are better than dogs. So what are you going to get a pet a dog or a cat?
by Benjamin Robertson
Persuasive letter
Dear Mum,
I’m writing this letter specifically because I don’t think I should have to do jobs around the house. I hope that you could be reasonable enough to see the good side of me being more freed up and have more time to be doing other things.
My first reason Is you're always worried about me getting sick. If I had to go out into the cold ice box air and empty the compost or get the mail, I might catch a cold. I fear If I touch the compost I might get sick or even worse catch a disease!
Convinced yet? My second reason for not doing any jobs Is that I would have more free time. If I had more free time I could baby-sit Grace while you and Billy can go out and do whatever you want while Grace and I will be perfectly fine and happy at home. I could get more homework done than I ever have, this will also improve my chances for passing the test and possibly getting into the inquiry classes at Cobham.
Now my final reason. Doing jobs makes me tired. If I do my jobs I would have to go to bed really late meaning I would get extremely tired and would most likely wake up late leading to me being behind at school!
Now, I would expect that you would have a think about this and I'm hoping to hear the most hated sentence I've ever heard and that Is… time to do your JOBS!
From your most appreciative son
Jarelle
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